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TheApollyon
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 Posted - 2005/09/14 : 20:39:59
http://www.master-storm.co.uk/audio/Apollyon-9mm.mp3
feedback appreciated :)
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bulby_g
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Posted - 2005/09/14 : 21:31:30
Not bad at all mate, needs some heavy eq'ing and some of the levels need sorting but once thats done I think you'll have yourself a good track there.
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TheApollyon
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Posted - 2005/09/16 : 22:55:03
cheers, glad ya like :D would sort the EQ's but my soundcard only transmits thru one channel and i aint got a clue how to do a mixdown :D
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yaddam205
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Posted - 2005/09/16 : 23:29:05
nice, need to bring the syth WAY UP at the 2 mintue mark
good trax
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TheApollyon
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Posted - 2005/09/18 : 21:28:05
cheers :D
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Ionosphere
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Posted - 2005/09/18 : 22:00:42
I go along with what's already been said
but what's bothering me....
are you fully aware of just who Apollyon is?
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djDMS
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Posted - 2005/09/18 : 22:57:34
Still loving this mate ;)
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SickPigRecords
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Posted - 2005/09/19 : 04:29:05
like the tune m8 lovin that little acid arp thing you got going on
a few little points
1. The track could do with an off stab
2.there is nothing wrong with your tune Wrighting ability how ever what is VERRY WRONG is that
Kick Drum put it down run away get some more kick samples
There are some on our website to get you started i allways found it hard to find good kick samples hence making a sample bank on our site
http://www.sickpigrecords.com/home
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TheApollyon
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Posted - 2005/09/20 : 23:16:47
cheers for the feedback all :)
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Originally posted by Ionosphere:
but what's bothering me....
are you fully aware of just who Apollyon is?
yes, he's a character in the bible who was said to be the king of the locusts and/or the keeper to the keys to hell.
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djDMS
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Posted - 2005/09/20 : 23:46:19
.....which sounds like a fair enough description to me! 
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8
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Posted - 2005/09/21 : 01:18:08
Just to get this off my chest, Record Topless is an awesome mix.
Good track though. Needs a tiny work but good, good stuff.
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Ionosphere
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Posted - 2005/09/21 : 16:50:09
quote:
Originally posted by TheApollyon:
cheers for the feedback all :)
quote:
Originally posted by Ionosphere:
but what's bothering me....
are you fully aware of just who Apollyon is?
yes, he's a character in the bible who was said to be the king of the locusts and/or the keeper to the keys to hell.
.... just a character. What, like in a kid's fairy tale?
Let's just hope he don't mind you using his name then....
Still like your tune though.
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eLASTIC
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Posted - 2005/09/22 : 05:20:36
Yeah not bad mate...that kick I agree needs to go.
Too bad its a bit soft through these earphones at work.
will check out again
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TheApollyon
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Posted - 2005/09/27 : 22:29:12
quote:
Originally posted by 8:
Just to get this off my chest, Record Topless is an awesome mix.
Good track though. Needs a tiny work but good, good stuff.
ah! glad ya listened to that mix and liked it, i saw it got a few downloads but not many people said if they enjoyed or not. :D
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Originally posted by Ionosphere
.... just a character. What, like in a kid's fairy tale?
It all depends on a person's beliefs. I'm sorry if my dj/producing name offends you but to me that's all it is, a name. Glad you like the tune :)
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Originally posted by eLASTIC
Yeah not bad mate...that kick I agree needs to go.
Too bad its a bit soft through these earphones at work.
will check out again
Yeah a lot of people have mentioned about the kick, and I would agree with everyone had I not intentionally done the kick that way. I dunno suppose I was just trying to put something in there a little different.
But kudos, everyone's opinions are entitled. I'm gonna try some FX work on it, try a different kick (Cheers to SickPig, im gonna check out them samples, btw the tune does have an off-stab but its quietened down and is only present with the J-3 - the duh-guh-duh - there is a bit where ya might be able to notice it coming in towards the intro) and if I think its a bigger improvement on the original I'll re-upload it.
Cheers all :D
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Ionosphere
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Posted - 2005/09/28 : 15:19:15
quote:
Originally posted by Ionosphere
.... just a character. What, like in a kid's fairy tale?
It all depends on a person's beliefs. I'm sorry if my dj/producing name offends you but to me that's all it is, a name. Glad you like the tune :)
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lol, wasn't offended mate, just worried about your well being.....
The changes you suggest should make a big improvement.
Looking forward to it.
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dj_excy
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Posted - 2005/09/28 : 15:48:06
yea thats good keep it up 
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