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Breekzy
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 Posted - 2005/07/05 : 14:25:31
Ive been playing about with this for the past 2 weeks (on and off), ive now changed the riff to some thing more energetic but i cant seem to put my finger on what needs changing.
http://www.hardcoreproducer.com/Breekzy%20-%20Body%20Movin%20(DEMO).mp3
let me know what all the good people at hhc.com think.
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Glen
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Posted - 2005/07/05 : 14:47:28
omg i love the jungley break in the middle... pretty mint tune :)
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Breekzy
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Posted - 2005/07/05 : 15:29:17
Thanks, its being ported into reason for a complete make over.
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Ionosphere
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Posted - 2005/07/05 : 18:21:42
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Originally posted by Breekzy:
i cant seem to put my finger on what needs changing.
let me know what all the good people at hhc.com think.
imo, a proper Bassline.
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Sean Apollo
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Posted - 2005/07/05 : 19:42:53
I really like the tune dude. Percussion needs to be more rough and bangin and it needs a thinker bassline. The lead sounds ok but could use some eqing jsut to take away from the fuzzynees of it. I really do like the breakbeat bit and the overall feel of the track is really nice. The main things that might get you a relaase on this are your bassline, and percussion. Good luck with it mate real good.
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bulby_g
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Posted - 2005/07/05 : 20:30:02
Agree with the above work on the bass and you will have a wkd tune there which i'd probably pick up on vinyl if I came across it.
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Hard2Get
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Posted - 2005/07/05 : 22:34:52
I seriously like this, the lead is wicked, i like the way it really fills the song up :) How many layers are there to the lead?
The DnB breakdown aswell is wicked :)
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eLASTIC
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Posted - 2005/07/06 : 05:15:50
Bangin Mate!
Sounds sweet all the way through.
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Breekzy
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Posted - 2005/07/06 : 10:08:29
Thanks for the possitive replys, i'll get right on the bass & percussion issues right away.
As for the lead its just one z3ta+ and some other blips & blops behind it.
As for the vocal stuff do you think its over used?
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Brian K
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Posted - 2005/07/06 : 10:27:58
dnb section isn't rough enough. try stuttering out the high hats and have more builds through them. the bass line sounds a little muffled/soft and could be varied up a bit.
you should use more of 'the record breakin' and the record breakin' part of the vocal.
other than what's been said above, I don't have anything else to add =P
good build off the start and overall nice sounding tune
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