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Dys7
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 Posted - 2012/03/18 : 02:27:23
Hey all, just took another try at solo producing.
This time it's a remix of Styles & Breeze - You're My Angel 
I'm still new to this all, so I'm sure there are problems with the mixdowns.
I still also may add a few tweaks (An artist is never finished!)
If you'd like, please take a listen and give me some good criticism.
Thanks!
http://soundcloud.com/dys7dj/styles-breeze-youre-my-angel-dys7-remix
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Dys7
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 Posted - 2012/03/19 : 14:24:42
Bump :) I'd love some general criticism
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cruelcore1
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Posted - 2012/03/19 : 14:54:04
I think Kick should be more powerful and both kick and bass could use increasing low end (low frequencies), more kick than bass in this case.
At 2.39 the low arpeggiating sound is too loud, and its loudness varies too much during playing the main part. I think you could use a limiter there (attack=0, or otherwise the sound will delay).
That's what I think. Other than that, sounds like a pretty nice idea/inspiration :P
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Edited by - cruelcore1 on 2012/03/19 14:54:27 |
Karthy
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Posted - 2012/03/19 : 23:14:24
Some nice ideas in there, some parts of the mixdown could use a bit of work though (kick sounds a tad weak).. Interesting remix nonetheless!
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