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ToggleIT
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United States
7 posts Joined: Jan, 2012
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Posted - 2012/01/15 : 19:01:29
Hi everyone I'm Dj Toggle Switch and I just finished this song today been working on it for a couple days.
If you have some time If you could check it out and leave some comments ans suggestions.
http://youtu.be/Tl_f7z00Xtc
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Samination
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Sweden
13,160 posts Joined: Jul, 2004
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Posted - 2012/01/15 : 19:51:48
well, the comment on youtube says it all. That track needs a mayor overhaul if it needs to sound like (Happy) Hardcore at all
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ToggleIT
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United States
7 posts Joined: Jan, 2012
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Posted - 2012/01/15 : 20:12:19
well I just started producing and I made that song all by myself no vid tuts or input cause I couldnt find any good videos for ableton and I just wanted to start. also i only did it in 2 days.
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Dys7
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Posted - 2012/01/15 : 21:21:11
Yeah, you need to listen to the genre more. This wasn't even happy. It was in a minor key. Also, no bass.
Listen to happy hardcore more. You're probably confusing it with UK Hardcore,which it doesn't sound like at all either.
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Dys7
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Posted - 2012/01/15 : 21:31:55
Before I tried producing, I learned music theory and I listened to everything encompassing the genre I wanted to learn. Start listening to more music, but when you do pay attention to the form, the way they construct songs.
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Archefluxx
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United Kingdom
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Posted - 2012/01/16 : 01:06:50
Be nice people, we all start somewhere.
Nakura's YT comment summed it up, as I said on YT. Certainly learn the fundamentals of the genre and understand what goes into the genre, but at the same time keep producing to gain experience in establishing a progressively better sound.
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Lilark
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United States
211 posts Joined: Nov, 2011
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Posted - 2012/01/16 : 02:03:40
[quote]Originally posted by Archefluxx:
Be nice people, we all start somewhere.
That we do. Dys7 for example didn't start off knowing everything. I know I certainly didn't, and still don't.
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Samination
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Posted - 2012/01/16 : 07:32:39
he didnt say it was his first track, that's why i was going harder on it.
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Anderjuk2002
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United Kingdom
85 posts Joined: Dec, 2010
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Posted - 2012/01/16 : 11:17:25
quote: Originally posted by Samination:
he didnt say it was his first track, that's why i was going harder on it.
Sigh.... (after reading topic title)
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Samination
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Posted - 2012/01/16 : 12:03:52
quote: Originally posted by Anderjuk2002:
quote: Originally posted by Samination:
he didnt say it was his first track, that's why i was going harder on it.
Sigh.... (after reading topic title)
"My first happy hardcore song" does not equal first ever song he has made. He could've made tracks before under other genre's.
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Anderjuk2002
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United Kingdom
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Posted - 2012/01/16 : 18:39:28
quote: Originally posted by Samination:
quote: Originally posted by Anderjuk2002:
quote: Originally posted by Samination:
he didnt say it was his first track, that's why i was going harder on it.
Sigh.... (after reading topic title)
"My first happy hardcore song" does not equal first ever song he has made. He could've made tracks before under other genre's.
Haha, i know bud. i knew what you meant was just trying to wind you up :P
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Samination
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Posted - 2012/01/16 : 19:15:47
/me searches for a shovel
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Archefluxx
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Posted - 2012/01/16 : 19:29:17
Samination, you are the last person any new-comer would want to post on their threads..
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Lilark
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Posted - 2012/01/16 : 19:50:44
quote: Originally posted by Samination:
quote: Originally posted by Anderjuk2002:
quote: Originally posted by Samination:
he didnt say it was his first track, that's why i was going harder on it.
Sigh.... (after reading topic title)
"My first happy hardcore song" does not equal first ever song he has made. He could've made tracks before under other genre's.
However, it IS still his first in the genre. Bazinga.
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Samination
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Posted - 2012/01/16 : 20:05:52
quote: Originally posted by Archefluxx:
Samination, you are the last person any new-comer would want to post on their threads..
and you're definitly not the first one anyone wants either, as you dont exactly strife to perfect anything
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Edited by - Samination on 2012/01/16 20:07:20 |
djDMS
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Posted - 2012/01/16 : 20:13:25
If somebody got hold of it, reworked it and slapped another 25BPM on it it'd sound pretty good.
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