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X-Ell
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Posted - 2011/03/26 :  13:35:44  Show profile Send a private message
Hey peeps just wondered if I could get feedback on my newest tune?

Not sure whether to carry on with it or leave it as it is, I'll be sending it as a submission to Ravers Addition 7 so want to get it spot on!

http://soundcloud.com/x-ell/x-ell-never-give-it-up-final

Thanks in advance :-)



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acidfluxxbass
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Posted - 2011/03/26 :  16:33:13  Show profile  Send a private message  Visit acidfluxxbass's homepage
From a personal stance I hate the vocal so I'll look at this from a production side.

The first thing that gets me is the pad sound. I think the envelope needs changing so the attack cuts out that odd pluck.

The kick sounds solid,with the bass, and the melody's very nice. Percussion sounds quite solid, not much wrong with the mixdown.

Theres not much else to say really. I dont hear much attempt at experimenting or much creativity. Its an alround simple track, which theres allot of.

Its a good attempt, and an example of your gaining experience


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Edited by - acidfluxxbass on 2011/03/26 16:33:47
djbood
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Posted - 2011/03/29 :  21:03:43  Show profile  Send a private message  Visit djbood's homepage
quote:
Originally posted by acidfluxxbass:
From a personal stance I hate the vocal so I'll look at this from a production side.

The first thing that gets me is the pad sound. I think the envelope needs changing so the attack cuts out that odd pluck.

The kick sounds solid,with the bass, and the melody's very nice. Percussion sounds quite solid, not much wrong with the mixdown.

Theres not much else to say really. I dont hear much attempt at experimenting or much creativity. Its an alround simple track, which theres allot of.

Its a good attempt, and an example of your gaining experience



Couldn't of put it better myself


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H3RO
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Posted - 2011/03/30 :  03:23:56  Show profile  Send a private message  Visit H3RO's homepage
I'm not a fan of the vocal either nor I'm not a huge fan of the lead. Also, the breakdown sounds really thin to me. I think it needs a few more layers and more of a phasing atmosphere effect. I also think the vocal could use just a touch of reverb and maybe play around with a delay effect to thicken it up and make it more exciting and full. Other than that, the melody is nice, and the mixdown sounds solid. But like they said, it's just pretty basic, nothing super special about it.

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