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Dante
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Vatican City State (Holy See)
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 Posted - 2010/04/29 : 18:17:28
The sun is out, the weather is great (at least here), here's a track to accompany it!
Constructive criticism welcome, but I'm in a good mood, so I'll take "it's crap" too ;)
http://soundcloud.com/dantedante/dante-aquifer-wip
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Audio Warfare
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Posted - 2010/04/29 : 19:23:04
Well it's not out here and it's pouring with rain!
Not sure I'm keen on that lead, just doesn't have much energy. Like the other little plucky lead and the arps though. :)
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DJ_FunDaBounce
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Colombia
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Posted - 2010/04/29 : 20:37:39
The stab chord thingy sounds a bit out of tune. The level on it is pretty weak too. I'd try replacing that or playing chords that fit better. As for the rest, the summer vibe is there. nice :)
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Dante
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Posted - 2010/04/30 : 16:38:42
Cheers boys! I'll keep tinkering ;O
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choonland
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Posted - 2010/05/01 : 04:07:13
I like the chords from the beginig, but I agree it needs a little work (without losing that nice vibe it has), because with the bass and the little synth all together it start to sound messy
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