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Duddz
Starting Member
Sweden
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Joined: Mar, 2010
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 Posted - 2010/03/06 : 16:26:58
Hi guys! My name is Anders and i'm from Sweden and I just really dropped by to post a link to my very first hardcore production. I've used a very basic software, Fruity Loops 9, to make it and I think it actually turned out to be great!
I was really hoping that u guys could maybe give some feedback! I hope u like it! Peace!
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0X3YM9foZfA
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acidfluxxbass
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United Kingdom
5,000 posts
Joined: Apr, 2008
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Posted - 2010/03/06 : 17:24:37
for your production, you have a good understanding of the music you are making. What I think improving is the following:
- Understanding of notes (some notes seemed a bit boring and repetitive until the main melody)
- Understanding of structure (Typical hardcore structure; intro, breakdown, melody, another verse, mini breakdown, melody, outtro (how i normally do it))
- Mix-downs (Harder side of production... this is effectively the levels and sounds used. You need to learn how loud a kick needs to be, and how the melody envelopes into the track without taking over it)
- Sound selection (Some of the sounds chosen felt a bit default for me) Try to experiment with synth vsts and stuff to get your own sounds and try to stick to that theme rather tan putting everything into different styles of saw.
- Transistions - overall very good, considering you claim to be new, but I think when you switch from one style of saw to another in the track, it sounds like two badly mixed tracks.
Given I grated the track a bit, its constructive. I enjoyed the track and think you could learn to be a good producer! Keep it up! Subscribved to your tube channel aswell :) Hope to see more!
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Duddz
Starting Member
Sweden
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Joined: Mar, 2010
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Posted - 2010/03/06 : 17:53:12
appreciate it! :D
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choonland
Advanced Member
Colombia
1,100 posts
Joined: Dec, 2007
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Posted - 2010/03/07 : 05:25:32
quote:
Originally posted by acidfluxxbass:
(some notes seemed a bit boring and repetitive until the main melody)
agreed, the begining is rather boring, theres something going on but it doesnt get out, but at 1:33 it gets awesome! I can tell your talented mate!
I like your style, distant from mainstream, many changes, good melodies... kind of reminds me of my songs too ;)
If this your first choon I can tell theres only great music waiting to be done man, keep 'em coming! 
as for the rest, acidfluxx has become a very good music critic, so listen to the man ;)
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Edited by - choonland on 2010/03/07 05:40:04 |
Rayovac
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United States
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Joined: Jan, 2008
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Posted - 2010/03/08 : 20:52:58
What AFB said with the exception of structure. That was a great tune, the scene needs more talented folks like you. Do keep at it.
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