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Mortis Advanced Member
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Posted - 2010/01/27 : 15:44:10
It's been a while since I last posted a track and a while since I've touched any production software but I got the idea to do this the other day and I've been working on it for a few days now. It's still a work in progress so bear that (and youtubes crappy audio quality) in mind
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Dante Advanced Member
Vatican City State (Holy See)
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Posted - 2010/01/27 : 17:57:19
Pretty good idea, and sounding good so far :) I think it could use an extra chord or two somewhere though, like towards the end of the main part it could go Fm F# D#m G instead of straight from Fm to G like it usually does. The riff is good, I'd just like to hear some more variation on the chords :D
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Audio Warfare Advanced Member
United Kingdom
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Posted - 2010/01/27 : 19:23:19
Nice mate, I like it. :) I think it needs more variation as both intro and main leads seem to drag out a bit because the loop is so short. Bass seems to phase in places as well. Like the track though man, sounding good.
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Mortis Advanced Member
United Kingdom
7,493 posts Joined: May, 2004
341 hardcore releases
Posted - 2010/01/27 : 21:45:10
quote:Originally posted by Dante:
Pretty good idea, and sounding good so far :) I think it could use an extra chord or two somewhere though, like towards the end of the main part it could go Fm F# D#m G instead of straight from Fm to G like it usually does. The riff is good, I'd just like to hear some more variation on the chords :D
quote:Originally posted by Audio Warfare:
Nice mate, I like it. :) I think it needs more variation as both intro and main leads seem to drag out a bit because the loop is so short. Bass seems to phase in places as well. Like the track though man, sounding good.
Duly noted, thanks guys.
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Ionosphere Advanced Member
United Kingdom
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Posted - 2010/01/27 : 22:59:25
So far , so good but. imo, the main synth riff alternates between major and minor and feels repetitive because
it has no emotional resolution one way or the other
and the Piano is slightly out of musical kiltter with the lead as it sounds as though there's some clashing notes.
Mortis Advanced Member
United Kingdom
7,493 posts Joined: May, 2004
341 hardcore releases
Posted - 2010/01/28 : 00:08:03
quote:Originally posted by Ionosphere:
the Piano is slightly out of musical kiltter with the lead as it sounds as though there's some clashing notes.
Yeah there is some clashing but I'm not too fussed about it. It's highly unlikely that I'll get around to fixing it or finishing this track or any others I've been working on for that matter. I'm pretty much done with the production side of things. Thanks for checking it out though
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Kisstasy Average Member
Canada
236 posts Joined: Jan, 2009
Posted - 2010/01/28 : 00:49:50
I like it.. though it would kill if the drums were deeper.. or if there was a light co-lead...
but I'm sure there's more to come! Sounds pretty kickass so far.
Mortis Advanced Member
United Kingdom
7,493 posts Joined: May, 2004
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Posted - 2010/01/28 : 10:34:46
quote:Originally posted by Kisstasy:
I like it.. though it would kill if the drums were deeper.. or if there was a light co-lead...
but I'm sure there's more to come! Sounds pretty kickass so far.
Thanks
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Posted - 2010/01/27 : 15:44:10
Why?
