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Prospect
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 Posted - 2009/12/19 : 11:52:15
http://www.mediafire.com/file/y2wgzahhy4t/Prospect - All Your Dreams.mp3
safe,
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Mortis
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Posted - 2009/12/19 : 12:01:50
The vocal sounds out of time.
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Meathead
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Posted - 2009/12/19 : 13:36:43
Aye the chopped up vox are out of time dude. No offence but the piano melody in the breakdown sounds as though you've just got your hands on Cubase 5 and used the VariAudio "export midi" function, exporting the melody of the vocals and used it as the piano melody. It even has the slighlty out of time notes in there it always produces. After the breakdown with a build up like that you'd expect a really mad D&B section, or just a really full on drop or something but it goes into nothing really and is a bit disappointing. I like the mid section and a like all the glitchy, FX'd vocal and that little tom tom end of bar fill, not a bad track just needs a few touches. Definitely cahnge the piano melody and sort the vox.
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Prospect
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Posted - 2009/12/19 : 15:40:55
easy man safe for the feedback, have made a note :-)
hmmm vocals, sound fine to me... uh oh lol, i'll ask my mate
nice 1 :-)
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