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kezzert
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United Kingdom
1 post Joined: Sep, 2009
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Posted - 2009/09/17 : 15:50:34
Crombie M.C new my space is up & running
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Rayovac
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United States
2,049 posts Joined: Jan, 2008
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Posted - 2009/09/17 : 16:16:55
Um... no offense, but you're not a good MC. You're doing it in an almost monotonous voice, and it sounds like you're purposely lowering your pitch as much as you can to "try and sound more manly" (and failing). And when I say almost monotonous, it also means your pitch keeps deviating in weird ways... not to mention your timing keeps going off in areas.
In other words, you're not exciting at all, you're boring. You sound like a robot. :s
Not trying to discourage, just keep on working at it. You'll get a hang of it eventually.
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FingazMc
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United Kingdom
2,761 posts Joined: Mar, 2001
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Posted - 2009/09/17 : 16:29:42
Have to agree on this one. There just doesent seem to be any emotion at all in your voice, it sounds like you were sitting on the toilet and thought i know il record some lyrics on my phone while i curl one out. Not saying that your lyrics are bad im just saying theres no emotion also can barely hear you so its hard to judge on lyrical content aswell.
Keep at it though mate, im still shit now and iv been doin this for ages haha ;)
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Fishy
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Norway
2,521 posts Joined: Apr, 2004
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Posted - 2009/09/17 : 16:31:30
Sorry to say, have to agree with rayovac and and fingaz
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