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ozmium
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Posted - 2009/09/12 : 00:55:03

this is my first jumpstyle song hope u guys like it

if it sucks then tell me straght up and il delete it lol cuz i know in the past i made some crappy songs

http://www.4shared.com/file/132048268/b1bfd76c/the_art_of_creation.html

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Edited by - ozmium on 2009/09/12 01:26:43

choonland
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Posted - 2009/09/12 : 02:11:11

I really like this one man
the best you have done so far :)

it can still be improved, so dont rush it, and take your time, and don't be lazy!!!

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acidfluxxbass
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Posted - 2009/09/12 : 02:33:02

i passed my thoughts over msn, but im totally with naturatech. you just need to put the xtra hour into making a decent structure and looking at the music from a new perspective.

rather than comparing this to your own older music, compare it to newer proffesional music and try to get it as authentic sounding as possible

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Mortis
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Posted - 2009/09/12 : 10:53:15

I agree with both the above. It's your best track so far but still needs a lot of work. Stick at it because your obviously improving.

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ozmium
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Posted - 2009/09/12 : 17:30:58

thanks guys

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rosin007
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Posted - 2009/09/17 : 19:39:59

You are obviously good at making the sounds and all, what you need to think about is structuring.

Anyway I think this sounds more like bouncy trance/dance. Cause it sounds nothing like the jumpstyle I've heard.

Remeber that hardcore, jumpstyle and hardstyle has a lot of parts with just plain kick and bass plus some claps and stuff and usually an intro, this has nothing like that, just consistant melody. ;)

Go to youtube and search for Kev Willow, he has some tutorials in FL studio which helps you with structuring hardcore.

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Edited by - rosin007 on 2009/09/17 19:43:21

D-tor
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Posted - 2009/10/15 : 02:20:54

I downloaded the song and I like it. ^^

Lookin' forward to future releases! ^^

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