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Lorenzo.Tweakn
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 Posted - 2009/08/15 : 16:18:03
http://www.4shared.com/file/125216148/ed356cef/hardcore_attempt.html
i been working on other genres as of late n figure i might as well try hardcore since i havent in awhile
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Mortis
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Posted - 2009/08/15 : 17:48:54
The melody is quite nice other than that I don't really think much I'm afraid. From what my downstairs speakers say the bass seems way to bassy, it also has a layer on it that comes in around 1:08 doesn't sound right, it sounds out of tune to me. Plus the FX that you've used it way to loud. The kick seems to get lost in the mix too.
Would be interesting to try a remix.
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Lorenzo.Tweakn
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Posted - 2009/08/16 : 11:23:56
switch the bass n the effects n kick n stuff.
http://www.4shared.com/file/125381981/6dd44392/hardcore_attempt_take_2.html
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Meathead
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Posted - 2009/08/16 : 11:37:18
I do like the melody in the breakdown, that sort of guitar thing (is that sampled from somewhere?) i think with a remix from Mortis this could be a pretty good track. But at the moment there's a few production issues. Too much reverb on that open hat for a start. Bass too high cut imo, there'sno top end buzz. Very basic mellow track. It has no real drive, just bops along.
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HardcoreHarryUK
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Posted - 2009/08/16 : 17:21:41
good melody on the breakdown..
agree about the FX - way way way to overpowering and loud.. but i can see what ur trying to do.
the main part where it kicks in uses far to familiair sounds.. to me these are boring now..
but maybe im a grumpy ****!
but wicked breakdowm / melody line
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