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        | TechnoCal New Member
 
  
  
    Canada
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 |  Posted - 2009/08/12 :  00:12:58       Hey guys just got some tracks I've made together for the listening. I need some feedback on everything! Especially mastering! Thanks!
 
 http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OypYDPJpRVg http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cTbWuwoTuo4 http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_4vafmCD2WA http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=l8IBJ345414 http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JFFwh9QszU0 http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6wNj8n_wzQE
 
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        | CiALiN Advanced Member
 
      
  
    Ireland
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 |  Posted - 2009/08/12 :  02:17:30       ill give em a proper listen tomorrow...sound good on the lappy speakers...wat daw u usen?
 
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        | choonland Advanced Member
 
      
  
    Colombia
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 |  Posted - 2009/08/12 :  02:49:43       
 quote:Originally posted by TechnoCal:
 I need some feedback on everything! Especially mastering! Thanks!
 
 
 hey mate! just listened the tracks
 
 in general i think they are well produced, my only critic would be about the lead, or main synth in some of the tracks,  it sounds kind of hissy, some EQing cutting the high frecuencies could do the job, and maybe layering another synth to make it sound more phat
 
 keep it up man!
 
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        | TechnoCal New Member
 
  
  
    Canada
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 |  Posted - 2009/08/12 :  03:50:02       Thanks a lot guys. I'm using logic pro at the moment and I've had some trouble with my leads and mastering them. Thanks for the feedback more to come!
 
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        | CiALiN Advanced Member
 
      
  
    Ireland
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 |  Posted - 2009/08/12 :  12:50:30       ryt i have em on now....
 
 what i crave - i like the piano and the arp in the background...bass seems to be a bit weak though..maybe fatten it up adding another layer or something....riff is nice when its building up..but when it kicks in it sounds muddy....its hard to pick out the bass..some eq'in would fix that easily..not a bad track at all
 
 remember tonight - the vocal stutters get kinda repetative like filtering them would have been a nice change.....again the bass seems a bit week..like the vocal stutters seem to be louder then the kick...the vocal isnt bad at all..i absolutly love the vocal effect u put on at 2.40..i agree with naturatech the lead is lacking a bit of power..good track though
 
 i listened to them all...all the tracks are nice i like warning..but i do notice that ur bass seems to be a bit weak in most tunes..but good work all in all
 
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        | TechnoCal New Member
 
  
  
    Canada
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 |  Posted - 2009/08/12 :  15:21:03       Wicked stuff thanks a whole lot man. The biggest problem I have at the moment is mastering (obviously from the feedback I'm getting) but you guys are really helping out. What frequencies should I boost for bass lines? And should I boost mid-high levels on a lead and reduce the high-highs? I'm glad you like what I've done with the vocals it was actually just me trying to cover up the crappy job I did recording them I just used a vocoder to create a harmony behind the main vocal line which is why it seems to be overpowering the kick. Thanks lots for the replys guys!
 
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    Ireland
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 |  Posted - 2009/08/12 :  15:40:33       if i was eq'in a bass id boost the mids and highs..the lead i reckon boost the midis slightly to give it a fatter feel..or layer it
 
 
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 |  Posted - 2009/08/12 :  15:43:25       Wicked thanks. So are there any parts at all where I need to boost lows? How does my kick sound too I figured it was eq'd right just the volume might be a bit off in a couple of tracks
 
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    Ireland
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 |  Posted - 2009/08/12 :  15:55:35       i never boost lows....just makles things muddy...i always cut 100hz off leads...then boost mids and high so its brighter..kick is fine
 
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        | TechnoCal New Member
 
  
  
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 |  Posted - 2009/08/13 :  14:25:08       Wicked thanks a lot I'll be posting a couple of new tracks in the next few days
 
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