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ozmium
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 Posted - 2009/06/14 : 07:19:01
tell me what u like what u dont like k
http://www.4shared.com/file/111712229/6b4160b2/midnight_sky_naturatech_remix__DJ_Ozmium.html
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E-Core
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 Posted - 2009/06/14 : 07:27:06
This is Naturatech's remix though?
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ozmium
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Posted - 2009/06/14 : 07:36:19
no its my remix of naturatechs song
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choonland
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Posted - 2009/06/14 : 07:37:31
quote:
Originally posted by ozmium:
tell me what u like what u dont like k
http://www.4shared.com/file/111712229/6b4160b2/midnight_sky_naturatech_remix__DJ_Ozmium.html
YOU UPLOADED IT ALREADY!!!!!????? I just sent you the midi 10 minutes ago!!!
lol, i guess its ok since I told you "do whatever you want"... ;P
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ozmium
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Posted - 2009/06/14 : 07:38:04
lol idk i work fast XD
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ozmium
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Posted - 2009/06/14 : 07:40:13
its also on my myspace
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choonland
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Posted - 2009/06/14 : 07:45:45
well, its ok if you post it here like a preview in order to receive feedback, but to me, it still needs a lot of work, after 2:00 it becames quite messy and out of tune for instance
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Lorenzo.Tweakn
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Posted - 2009/06/14 : 07:53:30
how the fuk can u get a remix done in 10mins?
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Lorenzo.Tweakn
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Posted - 2009/06/14 : 07:56:00
yea after 2mins it becomes a train wreck. no offense..........
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Mortis
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Posted - 2009/06/14 : 10:17:44
You can tell it was done in 10 minutes, sorry but it sounds like you used a basic FL kick,hat, clap
etc. It needs to have more presence overall and needs a lot of work on it. I agree what people have said about the 2 minute mark. I'd go back to it and spend more than 10 minutes on the production and over all structure of the song because it just doesn't "do" anything.
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HardcoreHarryUK
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Posted - 2009/06/14 : 12:35:56
hi,
have to agree post two mins its all over the place.
its just not in tune.
The first two mins are great.. but i take it the melody line is the part from the original tune anyway.
also the drums are naff.. to 'normal' and just come in from no where and the same drum pattern through out.. no rises.. falls.. crashes.. b-beats..
more work for sure.
but lead melody is great!
if anyone wants to mail me copy..
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acidfluxxbass
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Posted - 2009/06/14 : 18:03:00
yeah 10 minutes shows... after about 1.41 it turns to rubbish... the bass is very very faint and it eventually sounds like a very soft loop.. when the random chords come in, they arent supported by any other sound. when the secondary saw comes in.. it just sounds very soft and doesnt flow. the bass is too faint, the kick isnt powerful enough and the sounds used dont impress me mucha t all. then it all disappears and we're left with the faint bassline.. why then bring in the kick to finish the song?
no way mate. you NEED to spend longer on this... listen to other songs and then listen to your own and you will hear a huge difference.
in my oppinion, since your earlier songs, you've not improved much, so I suggest you go and think about were to go in production before uploading another song...
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