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ozmium
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 Posted - 2009/05/09 : 04:45:33
the 2 are called mystic and the beating of my heart and yes they are available for DL also its faster and u can actually hear the bass kiks so i hope you enjoy guys
getem at myspace.com/djozmium
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Edited by - ozmium on 2009/05/09 04:50:35 |
ozmium
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 Posted - 2009/05/09 : 04:57:51
reply if ya like it
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acidfluxxbass
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Posted - 2009/05/09 : 05:34:50
beating of my heart
- levels are all too low
- 'heartbeat' collides with the actual kick when they are played at the same time
- only about 20 seconds has a 4/4 kick
- no bass, bass stabs, or bassline
- melodies quite nice.. but the sounds around it just dont help it..
- weak, weak kick. no point in having a kick without a bassline and having it so weak. sounds like one of those timing tickers
- no hardcore theory... no structure.. keep working though
mystic
- sounds very similar to 'beating of my heart' sound-wise
- very basic in the sense you put a melody in one sound, hen another, and another which is basically the structure of the song.. not how it works
- weak kick
- no bass, again. basslines are the selotape that hold ur track together..
- 4/4 kick and a 4/4 hat gets boring. you need to add a snare or work on some kinda experiemental breaks
really, this isnt much of a technical advancement on your previous stuff. I dont think you've heard much. Some of the songs might be ear candy with all the 'cute' melodies, but you really need to get learning if you want to make the most of them.
you can see the above points negatively, as if im having a major rip into your tracks, or positively, whereby you learn from them..
keep at it.
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Edited by - acidfluxxbass on 2009/05/09 05:36:10 |
ozmium
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Posted - 2009/05/09 : 05:37:34
thanks for the help il keep working itl sound better trust me slowly but shurly it will get there
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choonland
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Posted - 2009/05/09 : 18:37:37
err i dont want to be harsh, but frankly that was very boring mate, the 2 songs sound practicaly the same, i liked better the first songs you posted, like "endless"
but dont be down man, keep making tracks, reading about music production, composition, mixdown, mastering, everything you read is useful, making music is not always "making music", its investigate, research, read...
one hour of listening tracks you like, and analysing them carrefully, can be more productive that 10 hours sitting in front the computer trying to make choons in FL
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choonland
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Posted - 2009/05/09 : 18:56:53
quote:
Originally posted by ozmium:
reply if ya like it
woops, sorry... I missed this, if you dont like it dont reply??
lol ;)
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ozmium
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Posted - 2009/05/09 : 22:08:04
check out the others maby yull like them
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