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choonland
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Posted - 2009/03/13 :  05:01:10  Show profile Send a private message  Visit choonland's homepage
so I was working in this track using a sample from the movie "Jerry mcguire"...

I tried to get it signed but.. uhhh... it wasn't

it still needs a little work here and there, but the truth is that I am sick of it, and I'm too lazy to finish it, so I thought "what the fluk, lets give that thing away!"

so here:
http://koti.mbnet.fi/natura/Naturatech%20-%20show%20me%20the%20money.mp3

tough love feedback wanted, please


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Edited by - choonland on 2009/04/17 22:42:15
choonland
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Posted - 2009/03/13 :  21:23:50  Show profile  Send a private message  Visit choonland's homepage
no comments at all?


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whispering
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Posted - 2009/03/13 :  21:30:25  Show profile  Send a private message  Visit whispering's homepage
Damn, this slipped off my radar compleatly. Listening now...

First impression: make it nastier and youve got yourself an ace frenchcore tune :p
Loving how the vocal sample is remixed in there.
Melody is awesome as always.
Think the bass/kick is the weak part, doesnt really support the rest. But then again i'm not a producer, so thats compleatly from a music listeners perspective.

Overall; digging it :)

Edit: ...and the "choir" part works great.


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Edited by - whispering on 2009/03/13 21:38:48
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Ok after listening this a couple of dozen times, i can say the track is awesome, and the problem i had with bassline/kick isnt really a problem with them. Its the "volume". This is definately a more "hardcore" track from you, so after the breakdown ( in ~2:15) when the kick comes back in, it doesnt have any "balls", it could be a bit more "rough" or louder IMO. But this is easily one of the best ive heard from you (Without Loop is still my favourite though :p).

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choonland
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Posted - 2009/03/14 :  14:53:58  Show profile  Send a private message  Visit choonland's homepage
lol, thanks for taking so much time listening, thats great feedback there!
I'm not touching this track for a while.. I kind of wanna rest from it, but when I do, I will definitely have in mind your comments :)


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tru bass
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Posted - 2009/03/14 :  15:11:49  Show profile  Send a private message  Visit tru bass's homepage
its a bit hectic for me..

that sample of the woman is really overpowering and annoying when played in a loop.

overall its good. not my sort of thing though


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whispering
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I got it, ive been listening frenchcore a lot lately, and if you listen that tunes intro:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pOPQMW7epAk

In that tunes beginning at 0:15 when the bass kicks in, it really kicks in. So when i was listening your tune, i expected a similar effect after the breakdown (at 2:15), so it was kinda a let down when it didnt come as hard as i wanted :)

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Originally posted by tru bass:
that sample of the woman is really overpowering and annoying when played in a loop.


I thought it was one of the best parts on the tune, heh.


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Edited by - whispering on 2009/03/14 16:28:27
choonland
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quote:
Originally posted by whispering:
I got it, ive been listening frenchcore a lot lately, and if you listen that tunes intro:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pOPQMW7epAk

In that tunes beginning at 0:15 when the bass kicks in, it really kicks in. So when i was listening your tune, i expected a similar effect after the breakdown (at 2:15), so it was kinda a let down when it didnt come as hard as i wanted :)


I see what you mean, and btw, i've heard about frenchcore...but I'm liking it :)



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Edited by - choonland on 2009/03/14 20:48:05
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agree with whispering :) great track though!

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Posted - 2009/03/16 :  21:11:21  Show profile  Send a private message  Visit Audio Warfare's homepage
Nice, thanks for this. Have to agree with everyone else but nice anyways. ;)

Oh to snare/clap sounds more suited to a Happy Hardcore track too. Definitely needs hardening up. :)


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