Sparkz_LuckyStrike
New Member
United Kingdom
49 posts
Joined: Jan, 2021
|
 Posted - 2022/01/11 : 16:17:19
Good for you for posting something up!!!
Here's some things tips:
- Sounds a bit too repetitive. There's not much there in terms of formulation. Needs arps, vox effects, thicker pads, etc etc.
- lead is very weak, seems unlayered, very flat. Either needs whacking to the forefront or effects like delay and reverb to give it some more energy.
- Clap is gash. Raw, dull.
- Alt lead at 2:25 is thin. fatten it up and layer it.
By all means it is what it is. A good enough attempt.
Alert moderator 
|
Printer friendly
